Nice paint job. The slight blackening around the vents and wear on the edges of the fins and wings was a particularly nice touch. However, the Douchy McNitpick in me must point out that the general consensus over on the Bolter and Chainsword (after a lengthy and heated argument, I'll admit) is that the twin-linked lascannons are usually a better choice than the typhoon missile launchers, as the Talon's role as an air-to-air interceptor comes first, with everything else second.
Oh poo, disregard that. The tactical criticism, that is, not the paint job praise (That's still cool). Figures I'd forget to look at the date. Nov 13 2012? that was back when the Talon was just a glorified skimmer, and the TMLs really were the best choice. My bad.